This morning, at my personal blog, I claimed I was about to head to work.
Assorted chores and one shower later, I’m still about to head to work. But first, here’s my response to today’s prompt at Poetic Asides, which was to select a color for a title and then write about it:
Flute White
I am not an artist, so
to suggest a flute, I reach
for a gray or silver crayon
but here at Cafe EnVie
we breakfast below a fine painting
of a jazz musician. The keys
of his flute shine out, bright
in the Monday morning gloom,
white splashes of light
like Cheshire teeth gleaming
from dark green thickets. Like
a trill of sparks within
a moody solo. Like the fall
of water from our showerhead
that, not being an artist, I
would try to depict
as something transparent —
streaks of white in a painting,
or streaks of black in line art — only,
the way it falls reminds me how
notes swarm out of a virtuoso’s flute
like clouds of fireflies. Brightened
by the sunlight pouring through
the bathroom window, the water
strikes the tiles in a cascade
of gold and of tinsel, silvery
as the oil-paint white
keys of the flute above us,
as glittering as the note
that sounds as our glasses meet.
– pld
Love these lines:
“notes swarm out of a virtuoso’s flute
like clouds of fireflies. ”
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