I forgot: writing poetry is hard.
I don’t think I’m going to title my daily bits of poem, because they won’t all be individual poems, and may in fat all be pieces of a single long poem.
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Pack the tent like pick-up-sticks, shake ice
from its nylon guts, jump in the car,
crank the heat, repeat—
three mornings in a row marked by the mad dash
to Tim Horton’s red signs, two double doubles each,
the CBC to keep us company
and Canadian. My hands crack, red
from snowmelt wash and gas station bathroom soap.
Night number four—all campgrounds closed,
we camp in a farmer’s field and wake
to geese shitting up a storm beside
a frozen pond—white ice, white shit,
white snow—and me to my period, red gush of blood
on top of all that white.
I love “My hands crack, red/from snowmelt wash and gas station bathroom soap.” and the last lines. This is great stuff.
Hey, got to this link via Joanne Merriam. I like the layout of the site. Also, this poem is very stark, fast. It’s that feeling of returning home after a vacation you’ve enjoyed too long. Very nice.
I like the way you rub the beautiful and everyday together. Great sparks!
The geese pun made me smile 🙂