Whew-ee… On first reading, I can’t decide whether I actually like this poem or not (it feels a little too long, but I like its twists, and the final lines have a good kick). (And because I fail at commenting, I should add that I’ve been enjoying the ones you’ve linked to earlier as well.)
Dude! I already wrote this one!
Whew-ee… On first reading, I can’t decide whether I actually like this poem or not (it feels a little too long, but I like its twists, and the final lines have a good kick). (And because I fail at commenting, I should add that I’ve been enjoying the ones you’ve linked to earlier as well.)